Sometimes whats all you need is…..
*Edited Today*
I’m not that confident about my poems. I don’t publish most of them. So please comment after you read my humble try.
Sometimes, what’s all you need
In you; is for someone to BELIEVE.
Faith in Humanity
Is shred like a lily
As in the garden cut by the scythe
in my heart I feel
How I miss her; those times
Where I sat lonely yet felt so nice
Super natural aside,
How I wish I had a friend to talk all through the night.
I limn the pain of the dreadful concatenation,
of hours and days that I cherished only to realize that they were compunction.
I know God loves and He cares for me.
But I wish I had a friend to speak through the night
I wish I had a friend that spoke to me
And Helped me sleep better when told “Its gonna be all right!”
Why wait upon Mans Lies?
When God’s promises are perfected over 7 times?
His Words are my comfort, my shield.
Sometimes all you need is a friend to believe……..
In Me God BELIEVED!!
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It’s Obvious Aint it? -Sir.Zombie
October 26, 2006 at 2:09 PM
Well done. I don’t think i’d ever publish a poem i wrote. You are courageous.
God bless
Maria in the UK
http://www.inhishands.co.uk
October 26, 2006 at 2:35 PM
hey Maria..thanks. You should…at least you could try!
God Bless.
October 26, 2006 at 3:02 PM
Oscar some of those words went right over my head, but the fault lies in my limited vocabulary. il look them words up in the dictionary. but the rest of it (which is most of the poem, i do understand some english!) is a great poem its the opposite of snobby-high-society-stuck-up its LOVELY! and you chose a really nice theme one of my favourites which i have never been able to successfully write about. write more ok and write a funny one next time … hehehe just kidding
this style suits u.
GOOD WORK BRO!!!
Diana
October 26, 2006 at 3:05 PM
Over the Years Diana..Ive Realised that Snobbish and Funny writings arent my gift. My writing something is. Im still on my journey to find out where my talent lies.
Thanks Sis.
God Bless.
October 26, 2006 at 3:08 PM
Oscar. i think this is your best yet!
it was beautiful. simply fantastic. this time it is obvious! lol
In Me God believed! WOW!!!
really good.
ok i think i’ve praised enough!
so call me. i need to ask you something
p.s I believe in you!
October 26, 2006 at 3:09 PM
and I agree with Diana.. there were a few words I didnt get! lol
love ya
October 26, 2006 at 8:52 PM
I loved your poem but what rang most in my mind is what you said to Diana…..”I’m still on my journey to find out where my talent lies.” I love that you said that. It says a few things about you. 1. You understand that God has gifted you (important). 2. You are risking (important).
You know what is so neat about Paul in Acts 16:6-10? He was confident that God led him to reach people in Asia. God closed the door on him so he eventually, after a few other attemts ended up in Macedonia. What is so great about this when I think of you like I reflect on Paul, is that if Paul didn’t know and sat at home becasue he wasn’t sure, Macedonia would not be reached. I think sometimes that we have to risk to really know God’s plans for us, and gifting of us. God teaches us through the process.
You remind me of Paul.
You are a blessing & I can already see that you are gifted with much ability!
blessings bro-
Shar
October 26, 2006 at 8:52 PM
“on the journey”…..
: )
October 26, 2006 at 11:49 PM
Wow Sharla..thats GREAT!!! Thanks for the Compliment.
Well a year ago things were different. I used to write to piss people off and used to make fun of them. I struggle with it everday. But I’m winning the battle wit h Christ.
Thanks for the Kind Words. Yes I knw God will take care of everything else…all I have to do is follow him.
In HIM,
Oscar.
October 27, 2006 at 4:42 AM
Exactly the reason why I tell you to publish your poems more often. I love it, I just posted on the GTC blog about trust and this poem spoke right to me.
After all thats happened over the last month, and still happens everyday, few things actually make me feel better, this was certainly one of them.
Keep up the good work, and keep spreading the good word.
You’re on the right track and remember as always, moderation is the key.
I know for a fact that you have changed. Somethings I still dont understand, but there’s definitely a lot of good changes too…
Like they say, “Change is necessary, but not necessarily bad.”
TC,
God Bless,
Pazz
October 27, 2006 at 10:55 AM
Hey pazz! Thanks man.
It means a lot to me.
October 27, 2006 at 1:26 PM
Lotsa comments gathering on this one!
God bless
Maria
http://www.inhishands.co.uk
October 27, 2006 at 7:51 PM
hehe. i was just about to say that…
November 1, 2006 at 10:49 AM
man, i never knew there are people posting on this site. man this is really god. and the poem is indeed very good. two thing tht can shake the world force it to think again. the power of speech and the power of pen. So spread your message by writing Oscar.
November 1, 2006 at 12:32 PM
Hey thanks Ansul!
November 3, 2006 at 12:02 AM
how about a new post?
November 3, 2006 at 11:27 AM
this is really good. god bless u oscar, prayer is the soothing balm for every pain. call me, or tell me ur prayer request i will pray for u…. +91-9886626997
July 17, 2008 at 3:12 AM
Mmmmmm*lickin my lips*…Tasty poem!!
Sometimes all you need is a friend to believe……..
and really, you would bloom.. you would not be the same.
You will definitely bloom because GOD is not the passive one in your relationship.*d-uh*
Take care Bro, -JC