A lost Poem

This is a poem that I had written when my Dad was very mean to me.

First born I am Indeed…….

First born I am indeed
A lil love do I also need
Mock me not mes amis on what I lose
Never know who fate mocks to choose
Neverthless you make fun of me
Let my father be.

My brother listen- greatly favoured you are
True; something you dont ask for
cant blame you kid for you dont know whats in store
He will never be the same as his current deeds
My dad, oh my dad wilst thou ever understand?

Imposturous mind I may be
or is it that you never liked me?
Love me a lil,Hold me a lil,Pamper me a lil
(Is it not human to need so?)
Get it out of your system -”Shout-Scream-holler “
For I care no longer.

First Born I am indeed…
A Lil Love do I also need.

6 Responses to “A lost Poem”

  1. hey. I’ve read this before..
    this seems to be the only post that i can post comments on for some reason..
    oh and osc, dont kill me but its ‘mes amis’ (plural) not ‘mon amis’. ‘mon ami’ is singular.

    plz dont kill me. but if it makes you feel any better you can correct my mistakes too..

    always remember that I really love you..thats why i have to protect you.
    *nods head in grave manner*

  2. Hmm is that so? OK ill try and do something about it. Ive been messing around with the codes of the theme. That maybe a reason to the problem you are facing. Anyways ..I’m pissed of with HYMNA. Tell you later.

  3. hey i forgot to ask. why are you pissed off with hymna??

    tell me soon

  4. Avete blog piacevole qui! Grazie, è molto duro a mine lle tai informazioni in italiano, ma scrivete molto chiaro e posso capire tutto.

  5. Thank you…. But I dont know who you are…or from wher you came from.

    Thanks my friend.

  6. I had to use the google translator :)

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